wow you are amazing, oh and if you dont get good feed back and stuff on here then move to booksie.com I have been from quizilla to mibba to booksie and booksie it probrably the best. There are actually writters there, you gte like thousnads of more comments, its not so strict but then again all the writters there are pretty strict themselves with grammar and if they see errors the will tell you. Just a heads up kay? I think you would love it so check it out sometime. My name is KytrisVemidethMedera. hmmmmoh and I love your profile pic. Your eyes are amazing too...but ill stoop there lol, im gonna check out your storry I saw it on quizilla.