Fee-hee-hee-heeny! / Comments

It'll all come together in time ;)

@ HopeIsAGift
I don't hate Trevor! I actually feel bad for him but they just aren't meant to be together and I just can't believe he hasn't figured it out at this point! I mean it's been four years!

hahaha you guys seriously just hate Trevor so much...

Just be patient :)

@ HopeIsAGift
WE WOULD NOT CARE. I get it - he's sweet and protective and loves Melanii but they just aren't right together !

haha I feel like Trevor could dissipate and none of you would care! LOL Its too cold to do anything very exciting down here (aka 40 degrees) hence all of the updates haha

I may be slightly insane. But that is not the point haha look at it this way, three not entertaining nights in hotels with poor wife connections means at least two quick updates when I do get internet ;)

@ HopeIsAGift
-voice of MermaidMan from Spongebob-
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIL!

Maybe just a little bit...

@ HopeIsAGift
WHEN I SAID I HOPED IT ENDED THE WAY I WANTED IT TO I BET YOU WERE OVER THERE CACKLING EVILY WEREN'T YOU?

haha! I figured you and a lot of other people wouldn't be happy with the ending! Of course, that's why there is a sequel! ;D

I had that fake chapter posted for a whole two minutes to fix the layout and you already recommended it lol I appreciate it ;)

haha You'll just have to wait and see :)

I'd give it one or two days :)

@ HopeIsAGift
Awh you're welcome! /I/ should be thanking/you/ because YAY THERE'S GONNA BE A NEW CHAPTER SOON AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I have to thank you! I've been feeling lazy lately and have been utilizing Netflix instead of writing :P Rereading your comments gave me the motivation to start the next chapter! So thanks for being so awesome! ;D

Your comments always make my night! haha And I know, Mel needs to get her shit together before she ruins one of her relationships ;)

He's taught me some stuff thought, too. It was a give-give kind of thing. It was a short interaction but he was so kind and far from greedy and I learned a lot about human-nature.

I hope he's alright. And I hope that he's feeling a little bit better about his situation. And I hope I can help him again. (:

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Thanks for reading/commenting on my journal. I'm glad you want to help people, too. Wanting to and being unable to is much better than ignoring the people who need help. So thank you for caring.
And I'm glad I inspired you. I hope that someday you do have the means to help others, because it's truly one of the best and most conflicting feelings I've ever experienced.

It's conflicting because I know I've helped a little, and that makes me happy, but it also makes me sad because he's still living in the trees, starving, cold, trying not to get drenched by the rain today.

It's a hard thing to understand. I can help, but I can never help enough. I just hope he filled his stomach today. That's all I can do for now.

You're welcome. I just saw your comment swap blog and thought since you were inviting feedback, I'd love to read your story and see what it's all about.

Layouts aren't the end all of stories, but if you want, you can take a look at mine and if you're interested in that style, I'll gladly make you one. No one says you need to be able to make your own and I don't really ever comment on layouts unless I notice something like the yellow on magenta. Some people might have a hard time with that and they might not read the story because of it. That's the only real reason I mentioned it.

A beta is someone who helps with your story. You send them your chapter and they'll read it over to check for any spelling or grammar errors you may have missed. Depending on what you need as well, you can bounce ideas off them, try out parts to see if it's working, and get their overall opinion on your story's plot and flow before you post it. It's just someone to help you with areas if you feel you'd benefit from that.

I was just checking on the music that it would be included because it's so common to see people just throw music in for no reason and it doesn't develop the character, add to the plot, they just throw it in because it's what they like so I was just asking.

I figured there would be stuff that will be explained as it goes on probably like her break up with Adam obviously. Like you said, it's only one chapter so far so I definitely agree you'll develop these things as you write.