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Hmph. The situation was RUDE. And the curling iron....
OK, that one was totally my fault. I shouldn't space out while holding chunks of burning metal to my friends' scalps.
HOWEVER!
Beth should have submitted to my torture without a struggle! If she had, there would have been no make up in her eye!

Well, I still prefer Liam. Seth is.....I dunno. I just prefer Liam.

Well, Seth's either dead, in intesive care/a coma, or that was an android that looked exactly like him.

No matter what, you've got plenty of plot fodder.

either way, you are a murderer.
At least I only kill people before they appear in the story.
Though the only people I've killed so far are women and children...
OK, I'm just as bad as you. Kill anyone you want.

You're just a murderous little bugger, aren't you? As long as someone dies. I fear for your characters- I really do.

Who the heck is sebastion?
And sorry for the long wait, I fell asleep.

Moody and AWESOME! He's so interesting to write, him being a quadruple agent of whatever.
And this time, try to restist the urge to kill you lead male character. Pretty please? Or you'll scar all your characters for life.

Good.
And I know! He's such an interesting character. Many different personalities.

*sigh* I know, I know. I'll try to.
BTW, hurry up and update Arov.

Well, I haven't the foggiest. You should probably ask beth- she might know.

Honestly, I have no idea. I haven't heard much about it yet. When is yours?

Aw.
Well, you're welcome, at least.
And you changed your picture! We can actually almost sorta see the face behind the mastermind!!!

I thought the flirting was very good.
And not everyone who reads actually subscribes- myself spent like a year without subscribing to stuff until I learned you could, even though I read every update anyways.
And How old is your story? Your new chapters are good, but go back and read the first ones. Maybe they are crap compared to what you can do now- and that's what people read first when newcomers start reading. You have to make a good first impression- consider editing the early chapters, just a little.

Too late, it's already begun; my reader are divided into Team Ezu and Team Jack. Some of them even use that exact phrase.
And WonderLand is updated every Saturday now, and Little Red is every Friday, so long as I don't forget.
And unless I'm sick, cause I'm sick right now, I should be good for the superbowl.

I love your assassin story! (= especially the fighting parts, haha. but good story, update please! :D

They stop being cute when they stop being puppies.

And the chapter so far is kinda cliched and sappy, but I can't help it, it's the truth, and sometimes the truth is cliched and sappy.
I'll probably wait until next friday to actually put it up, but if I finish before then and you want to read it, I'll send it to you.

You will get bored, trust me. Trixie was cute too, now she is just annoying.
And I'll be ready.
And aweomse!!! I'll go read it!
And I'm already working on the next chapter of Little Red. I'm going to explain a whole lot about Ezu. It's fun!

Ahhhh!!! Puppies rock!!! That's exciting! It'll be so cute...
Until you get bored of it, then it will just be annoying.
But until then, so cute!

Well i thought it was awesome, so there.

Well written? No. Pretty good? Sure. But nothing special. Not good enough to get published, so there.

And I always like your stuff. You don't because no writer likes their own work.
And you update theif while I take a shower.

Because awesome is an awesome word. So there.
And you think your stories are uncreative, I think mine are crappily written.

And I thought the part about not wanting to sleep in the same tent was funny. You loser.