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His whole family is dead. Remember? His mom and sis were eaten by wolves, and his dad burned to death.
Mean to my characters? Psh, not at all.

And I read it. AWESOME!!!!

Don't you remember anything? Ezu's whole family is dead. His mother and sister left him by DYING. That's why he has issues with women.
And the adventure is no where NEAR done. I still have plenty of tricks up my sleeves! And I like the Prince idea, I'll have to think of a way to insert that...

Update Arov NOOOW!!!!
I wanna know what happens!!! You're spo evil, leaving a cliffhanger like that!

ok then. I'll go do it now

I can do it through mibba, but it might be easier on gaia. Which one?

Actually, can I send it to you in a message? I don't think I did this chapter very well, and I want feedback. Besides, I'd rather post it in the morning, when I can get a lot more people to look at it and read it. So can you be my editor this time please?

Yay! OK, hold on, let me get it up.

Are you still there? I just need to stick in a finishing paragraph, and I'm done!

I'm going as fast as I can- I only have 400 more words to go!!!!!

But you always take three months between updates, you evil woman!!!

And I might just go with Chess or the Cat if you can't think of anything. Arg.

C.C. is WAY too girly. Think of something else.

And no updates yet. I'll working on it though, promise. You do the same!!!

Yeah, it's moving at a fine speed now, but this next chapter pretty much explains the whole plot. No mystery or anything. Dammit.
And I'm glad- he is a main charatcer, after all, I'd hate for him to be, well, hated. Oh, and he needs a nickname. Something derived from Cheshire Cat. Cat sounds too girly, and neither Chess nor Shire work very well. And I'm not typing Cheshire Cat every time, it's awkward.

I think I updated since you last read. Sometimes I forget Jack- I'm not good with juggling three characters. You notice I've just sent Jinx away, I couldn't handle four!
And don't worry, I have a plan for their escape. Fronkensteen gave me the idea month's ago, and I've been DYING to use it. It is going to be awesome!

He just likes women. Well, I guess I can't argue with that. So does Ezu. In fact, he's going to meet a cute kitchen maid right now. Like the dirty man whore he is. Goddamit, we wasn't supposed to be like this when I started the story...

And ok, that makes sense. That whole fire and water thing. I probably should have seen it coming.

Yes, I have forgotten. It was a long freaking time ago.

OK, ok, I'm working, man! I hope to actually explain some stuff. I'm worried the story is moving pretty fast already, but I don't want to be stuck in limbo like I was with Little Red for twenty chapters.

It is perfect. And I thought she was lying. Why is she such a bi-atch? And why is Yamir a man-whore? I can sense much character development in the winds, young grasshopper...

I read it. Lovely- isn't Odine the poison chick though? I get so confused.
And I don't know if I'll be able to writer 1000+ words in twenty minutes, but I'll certainly try!

I'll try. You might have to stay up kinda late though. I'm only 700 words in.

Well hurry up. I'm working on wonderland right now, but I don't think it will be up by tonight. I'll try though.

The closest I can come up with it is "He doth protest too much".
It's the same idea, but not what I wanted. Oh well. It'll have to. Have you updated Arov yet?

No, it's an expression. It would start like, "You know what they say,..."
But I can't figure it out past that!

Hurry up and figure it out- I need to know