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  • Ronnie Mac

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    To be honest, when I commented, I hadn't even realized it was your story because I may or may not have been forced to read it through the comment swap (I'm sorry, I had to but that doesn't mean I didn't like it!) and I only realized it when I was on your profile, responding to your earlier comment and checked out what stories you'd written so far. No, really, I like you're story (so far, and if I like the first 2 chapters, chances are, I'll like the rest of the story). Also, I just re-read my comment on your story, and I apologize for some of the errors there. I cringed when I read them.
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Yes, amongst my friends, I'm quite known for having a dirty mind and saying a dirty joke when someone says something. Actually, I think almost everyone in my class knows that's how I am, but I can't be sure.

    Oh ho ho, no, no, no. They're all different, but I'm sure you knew that. At least, I think they're all different. I honestly don't know. I think that means I'm going to have to go Google it.
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:18am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    I completely agree. However, in those cases where the author just writes silly little comments in the author's note area, I'll just stop reading it after the first couple ones, and if they really do have something really important to the story to add, well it sucks to be them because I'm not going to read it. That's why on my stories, I don't add an author's note unless it's the last chapter and/or a one-shot and I have something to say. That way people who read my stuff (if I ever decide to put something on here with multiple chapters) will understand that when there's an author's note, it's usually something they might need to know or just a little extra information for them. Y'know what I mean?

    Well, those silly people who happen to think that's what "preface" means, they should search it up in a dictionary and a new word to their vocabulary. Although, to be honest, I use to be one of those people. I was never sure what the difference between a "preface" and "prologue" was so I had to Google it.

    It's all good. I caught on the first time I read it and I was like, "Ouu, I saw whatchu did there." I like puns, even the short and/or kind of lame ones. Unfortunately, I suck at coming up with puns on the spot so I stick to making the stupidest, lamest dirty jokes I can think of.
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:48am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Aw, thank you. Your comment is greatly appreciated, especially because it shows that some people actually read the author's notes. Yes, I still completely agree that it should be split into chapters but I just can't seem to make up my mind on having it as a Preface or three introductory chapters to the rest of the story that I'm writing now. Anyways, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I quite like that little pun-like-thing you threw into your comment, "I was literally blown out of the water." Have a good day. (:
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:40pm
  • WishingOnFireflies

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    She doesn't hate them, she just has no interest. Thanks very much for the input, though. Always looking for ways to improve.
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:30am
  • WishingOnFireflies

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    Thank you for the comment! I'll try describing everyone a little more. Photo, though, doesn't dwell on people. She settles until she can move on, so people don't mean a lot to her. Also, in the later chapters she's blindfolded, so visual descriptions could be a bit tricky... Definitely going to work on it though.
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:51am
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    Then I'll wait for that WTF moment. I just can't wait to read more. I absolutely love that story.
    April 25th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • Gia De La Muerte

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    Haha but posts like that is what makes it worth going to the journal section :P
    April 4th, 2012 at 04:47am
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    haha well on the flip side, I never have anything worth posting :P
    April 3rd, 2012 at 10:46pm
  • Gia De La Muerte

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    So far it is :P
    April 3rd, 2012 at 04:44am
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    haha I'm Gia, nice to meet you. I'm most likely the person that comments on random things posted here (:
    April 3rd, 2012 at 03:01am
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    Wouldn't we all haha
    April 2nd, 2012 at 11:35pm
  • Gia De La Muerte

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    That's what I said! ha he prolly did :P ehh, it's all water under the bridge >.<
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:03am
  • Gia De La Muerte

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    Ha, no. He came back quite a few times. My swears he may have been flirting, but I doubt it. When she said "I like you, you're nice" at the end of our visit, he was all "Well thanks, my name is Nick so next time you come you can ask for me blah blah."
    April 2nd, 2012 at 03:38am
  • Gia De La Muerte

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    Haha yes, it's Nick, but that's all I know :P Right? My mom is the poster child of opinions -_-
    April 2nd, 2012 at 03:09am
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    Lol no! I had seen Easy A waaaay before I met Nick at Chili's, maybe cause my mom thought he did too, so I guess it just stuck in my head. Haha oohh Brandon Beemer <3
    April 2nd, 2012 at 02:50am
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    Lmao I guess. Okay, looking back on it he only looked like Penn in Easy A, cause every other picture, they don't look a like...weird. I think it was just the hair style he had at the time :P
    April 2nd, 2012 at 02:13am
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    Ehh in the right light I guess, but he was a bit cuter imo :P he was tall, that's all that mattered haha. But I blew it so damn bad.
    April 1st, 2012 at 11:57pm
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    Haha I know, I haven't gone back since then :P Oh jeez...he looked like the guy in Easy A, the one who's the mascot if you've seen it, so cute lol
    April 1st, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • sporteegurl

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    awww. but i dont like secrets! lol.
    March 8th, 2012 at 06:12am