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  • astroz0mbie

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    I hate editing. I can't stand going through the trouble to change things around and know I'm probably not going to like it anyway it's written. So wtf is the point? I mean, I just don't like altering it. Maybe it's because I'm too lazy and I don't give a fuck, or I just don't have the literary education to know what to change it into.
    June 7th, 2007 at 08:47am
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    T_T
    well now I know I'm shitty at writing.

    this is why I refuse to read a book on a day I'm going to write. :|
    June 7th, 2007 at 08:20am
  • astroz0mbie

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    Did you see "For Reasons Unknown." ?

    I don't know where the hell that came from. And...A Lack Of Color...that was completely impromptu. The ending was so sudden to me...I didn't plan anything in that. I just kept imagining this lonely, not-as-young-as-she-used-to-be woman sitting at a bar every night. The man...is like the imaginary father figure she's created every night at that bar. I'm not sure anyone would ever understand that.
    June 6th, 2007 at 05:52am
  • astroz0mbie

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    You don't need to polish it. It came out perfect.

    Ocean Eyes? O_O

    I've begun to hate that story...
    June 6th, 2007 at 05:45am
  • astroz0mbie

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    I already have.

    Let's stop staying "full show". It sounds...illegal. >.>
    June 6th, 2007 at 05:39am
  • astroz0mbie

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    ...it'd come out really shitty.

    It's like trying to fit a watermelon through a straw. Impossible.
    June 6th, 2007 at 05:23am
  • astroz0mbie

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    You do what? Getting specific or seeing the show?
    June 6th, 2007 at 05:12am
  • astroz0mbie

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    You don't have to get into specific, by the way. I'm young, these stories won't matter when I'm older. Who knows. I might not be writing when I'm older, even if I want to. Remember I'm not writing a full blown book. These are just drabbles. They're just 'browsing' in my head, I guess. It's no full show. You don't want that.
    June 6th, 2007 at 04:46am
  • astroz0mbie

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    That's okay. I never edit my stories...so there's a lot in there I should've left out, but right now I really don't care. I'm tired of aiming for perfection.
    June 6th, 2007 at 04:44am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    No! The written in five different colors thing: That's a different way to give people's P.O.V.s. That's why I did it.
    June 6th, 2007 at 02:24am
  • astroz0mbie

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    k.

    I think you should post more stories if you have anymore..
    June 5th, 2007 at 09:22am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Okay! Thanks in advance!
    June 5th, 2007 at 06:08am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Hi! Will you please read my stories? Death Of Friends is a slash, so don't read it, okay? I know you don't like slash, so I'm telling you now, okay? My name is Dana.
    June 5th, 2007 at 05:31am
  • astroz0mbie

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    Are you still intoxicated with those peices?

    xD
    June 4th, 2007 at 12:23am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    So I opened the file on my computer of your guitar rift. It popped up with iTunes. I don't use iTunes though, my sister does because I have a MP3 player and she has an iPod. Well, when I opened it I accidentally saved it. So my sister plugged in her iPod and it saved onto it. Now she has your guitar rift on it and she can't delete it even if she wanted to and she was like, "WTF is this?" I laughed and told her what it was. She was like, "O.o Ok... That's random..." Lmfao. I just thought I'd tell you.
    June 1st, 2007 at 06:58pm
  • astroz0mbie

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    Meh. I didn't really know what I was writing. I just sort of when along with it as I wrote.

    I get that way when I'm reading a book, browsing an art gallery, etc etc. And I get sad when I read something fucking peice of work that stunned me because I wish I'd written it. :O

    Do you have a Deviantart?
    June 1st, 2007 at 05:03am
  • astroz0mbie

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    I saw that. ;)

    I added a oneshot to Wonderwall.
    It's kinda different. In second person. :\
    June 1st, 2007 at 04:55am
  • astroz0mbie

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    o.o
    June 1st, 2007 at 04:53am
  • astroz0mbie

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    :O

    You live!
    Where did you disappear to?

    (let me guess, umm, you have a life?) xD
    June 1st, 2007 at 04:41am
  • The Way

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    I'm glad you liked Rainbows. :) Thanks for reading and commenting.
    May 31st, 2007 at 11:33am