Thank you for the comment. It helps to know what people think about the story they're reading. I'm hoping the next few chapters fulfill the original twist that you're asking for =]
Oh, believe me, I know exactly what you're saying, especially with the whole predictable concept.
I'm not at all trying to defend my writing just so I don't feel insecure, and trust me on that, but as predictable as it seems now, I hardly think you'd be thinking the same thing if you knew the entire story(:
I have a very strong resentment against predictable plots, all because I've wasted so much money on books that have only ended up disappointing me. Lol.
I just ask that you stick around until the very end. It may take a while, though, because this story was written a few years ago and I am currently rewriting it. About eight chapters were deleted a few days ago, and I have yet to delete the first. x]
Hey, thanks so much for the comments =D They make my day really special and it motivates me to write more. So thanks for caring enough to leave a comment. <3
Yes we are, I hope you're still willing to read our story.
Sorry to let you down and the long wait.
We both had a lot on or mind and such.
Hope you like it.
xoxo ~ Ryan.
Okay, I know I said I'd send the post, and I didn't, but only because I promised my friend I'd update today, and I thought it'd be unfair to give it to you last night, and demand that you'd be done by the next day. THe next one is coming at you tommorow though, promise!!!!!
Kay, totaly missed your post, sorry
Thanks for the offer, I'll definately send you the new post as soon as it's done.
and stuff like that is not going in my stories, I don't believe in writing that stuff, I'm only 14