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I just wanted to let you know that I recently created a website. It's actually turned out pretty well so far.
http://www.thefreshpen.com
The site is all about becoming the best writer you can be. You can post your work there, and have it critiqued by your peers. I have had a few of my own works critiqued and the insight is very helpful. All of the critiques are done through a new comment system on the page. There is also a forum where you can chat with all of your friends on the site. You should definitely look into it. If you are interested in writing for the site, or if you have suggestions, please let me know. I would love to hear ways to improve... Thanks!

PS: Please check out my new piece, "The Touch of Sadim," and let me know what you think. Thanks!

hey berry, we haven't talked in a while, whats up??

Ello Berry! Long time no speakies.

STFU! I didn't know that you could get on Mibba again.

um.... RAWWWWWWWR!!!!
*tickles you to death*
whats up? O_O

hi, wats up???

bored as hell, school sucks BIG TIME
i may not be on a lot on saturday, but we will see, i may go to the hospital, so untill they knock me out, or i pass out(i hate hospitals) im going to be on mibba

LUVS YA *kugs and kisses*

i miss you to
i wish i could get on now *pouts*
love you *hugges and kisses*

hey october, what up... i miss you lots *pouts* but on the up side, if i can, i'll get on saturday

I dunno what I'm doing anymore...
I should leave,
Things will get better if I leave...
But I want to be selfish...
I want to stay...
I just don't know anymore.

Berry...
I think I'm going to leave mibba.
Love you.

Berry!
I'm sorry, Sara's internet cracked the shits, and then when I got back into chat you were gone... =[
Talk to me, love.
You know I'm here for you.

*hugs you closely* What is the matter October? You know that I am here for you no matter what. If you need to you can PM me.

you leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeft!
*cries*
okay i'm good now.
obviously i'm not telling you something. i'm amazed you didn't see through it... my lies are shocking.
In actual fact... he said stuff to me in the first 2 parts of the prac, and in the thrid part came up behind me and wraped his arms around me and i started shaking... and then i dropped the test tube i was holding, and the aluminum hydroxide in it went over my leg, and i got burned, because i was using concentrated sodium hyroxide and it huuuurt. I also had to pick up the broken test tube and i had the pieces in my hand, and he said something to me again, and i kinda clentched my hand around the glass and now my hand is all cut up. >.<

yea, im on, but im at school..... and i can't get on today, i have to go to work at 5

depends on what days i have to work, and how long.... maybe friday afternoon, or saturday morning..... um, my time

the reason i haven't been on is because my stupid school blocked chat, and i haven't had time to get on my laptop at home... i miss you bunches *hugs and kisses*

don't worry about it.

and as to why i'm not good, i had another fight with charlee at school, a teeny bopper tried to slap me, i did something stupid and had the creepiest fucking dream... you were in it.

in answer to your question that i was half way through typing when you left the chat, i'm not the best, you?

You on chat or...?