BeautifulBreakdown / Comments

Hey, thanks for the comment on my poem =)
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Hey, I started a new story that I kind of want more people to look at. So, I was wondering if you would just check out. No strings attached. You don't have to critic or comment unless you feel compelled to. I just want you to look at it and see if you like it.
> http://stories.mibba.com/read/253900/Hypocrite/

i'm going to continue the story as it is, then do a sequel and skip ahead for years so they'll be out of college.

Hi!
You commented on my story, Your Love Is Where I'm Falling and I'm considering doing a re-write of it.
It will have the same characters, they'll just be older.
What do you think?

Hey! Im Breanne :] I see you like the Jonas Brothers. I just started a new story called “Into the rain” Is there any way that you can check it out and give me some feedback? Thanks :D

Hey, thanks for the comment and I am glad you liked the story :)

Hey, look, I feel really bad but I haven't been going online very often these days - hence the late [i]replies[/i]. A lot's been happening - like, I dunno, my parents (mum & dad) have been having big fights over whether or not we're going to move. I have heaps of school things going on - assignments and tests all due next week. And plus I've just been feeling really weird and every time I go on the computer it gets worse... if that even makes sense. But I have been trying to go on for you :) Lets see how lone it takes for me to reply next time, aye?

Why'd they do it? Honestly - that shouldn't be legal. I mean, seriously! When you give someone money, you can't take it back if things go bad. Gah. JUst the idea annoys me - never mind the fact that my best friends life is pretty much up for auction right now :( How can an eighteen year old owe that much money to (oh, whoever, um, wants it)..?! You don't have any money - duh! You're in (?) [i]college[/i]!!!!

Has your dad found out yet? I hope you're ok. Really, I get scared because I can never see you, that you're not telling me everything. That things are really [i]really[/i] a lot worse than you say. You're going to be alright, ok? I swear to god. You will be.

Texas? Cool! I've obvs never been... *sigh* And I don 't think I did..? I need to re-send my one to you! In fact, I might do that tomorrow. I'm going to Lea's today; haven't seen her in ages.

thankyou, glad you liked it(:

Haha one time my mom wore one of my dresses and I made fun of her the entire time she had it on and I also got grounded haha she doesn't wear my clothes anymore though, but I do steal some of hers haha.
But all that stuff gets boring after a while I am grounded and have all the same in my room and I still have nothing to do.

Hah our moms are twins!
Sometimes I think she's just been watching too much TV and is confusing her life with someone elses I would probably get in deep shit if I told her that to her face, but it would be quite hilarious.

Haha It's their petty mom drama, she gets into shit with the neighbors, all of these women watch to much desperate housewives and feel the need to live their lives like that, our neighbor is having an affair with her sons college roommate, this is what my mom and her friends talk about when they come over. It's like TV when you eavesdrop

I know! She comes home from work and is stressed and immediately starts bitching to herself as she washes the dishes, its not a pretty sight to see then my father comes home and she is all normal.

I know haha and then they bitch at your for ever because they had to clean your room. My mom will come into my room yelling and start cleaning and i'll have to pry the hangers out of her hands so she'll stop haha it's intense, my mom is scary when she is in cleaning mode.

Oh god my mom used to do that alllllll the time and it would kill me.
Especially when she found stuff she wasn't supposed to see, that wasn't good.
Now she's stopped giving a shit and only yells at me to clean my room, I'm going to clean it tomorrow morning ahah I've been saying that for like a month now, but I am getting sick of the mess so I think it's time.

Where do you go?
It's pathetic how lazy I am sometimes, I have so many bottles in here and some plants one of them have ketchup on it. My mom gets so grossed out when she comes into my room she is a giant neat freak and I am the complete opposite.

How far away is your school?
I should probably go to sleep too, but I can't.
I have to clean my room tomorrow and it is extremely messy, all the clothes in my closet have some how ended up on the floor and there is a gross collection of cups on my desk.

I'm probably going to be one of those too, I start off good but as the story progresses i'll probably slow down especially when I get busy, right now I've been bored so I didn't have anything else to do.
I'll check it out.

Sweet, which ones?
I updated a bit ago.
I'm not up to much, I can't sleep so I'm just talking to the few people that are online.
I want to start a new story but can't think of anything.

What's up?

Hi, I'm Angel.