FukkPrsdntGasman / Comments

No problem. I don't really help alot of people... actually, honestly. I think you're the first person that I've helped.... weird. I'm personal when it comes to writing, I guess. Don't let anyone in, and if they're in, they don't leave :P

Ahah, don't read the dictionary (x That'll just force you into using words that you don't need to. It just makes the readers more confused and like you don't know the english language xD

Like, use synonyms for words too. I use dictionary.com alot if I can't think of anything, and that site has saved my writing more than just a few times.

Then theres just the actual quoting and stuff, rewording things, ect. ect. ect. Honestly, it takes a REALLY long time to learn alot of the stuff that its about to make your writing really great, but those are the basics that I know, hah :P

AHA, or just telling them they suck at writing. That always crushes peoples dreams ;D

Well, you're talking to a retarded person like myself here. That knows the meaning to comptemplation and derogetory. xD
But like, when it comes to your writings, try using 'I am' and 'we are' less. Especially if its adult male fan fictions. You really think that Billie Joe and Mike would walk around saying out their words fully? ahah (x
Yeah, I'm helping you o.o Wow... I'm helping people... it feels... funny o.o

And the details could use some work, like your few word sentences. 'Billie Joe put his guitar on the stand.' is honestly a bit too bland, try putting like a few adjectives or something into it, that always interests readers and everything.

But as far as I'm concerned, this story looks pretty good so far. I'm not done with it yet, ahah (x

YES! I shall. Nearly everyone that I know really well puts up with my bulls.hit. They should learn to too... honestly. If not, they're a bunch of p.ussies that need to grow a c.ock o.O
Wow, so oxymoronish right there... ANYWAY.

I'm reading it right now, ahaha. You need a larger vocabulary, honestly >.<

*s.hit and *s.hit (:

I called everyone stupid (: And they read my about me section thing, saying I might think their shit is shit xD its hilarious.

BAHAHA PEOPLE ALREADY HATE ME. atleast, I think.......... o.o

lulz ur so retarded itz da blu 1 u tard i win u phail so get ova it lulz i have billy jo u do nut~

lulz u b dreamin dat wuz dat uglee gutar gui that lukz 3409850345 yeerz old lulz get da fux ova ur self sweete cuz u aint got SHIIIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lolz ur funne bc well he wuz wiff mii last nite bc i wuz takin it up da azz 4 hiim bc i dnt care w/e billy jo wantz 2 do i will do it 4 him~

betch get da fux ova ur self mii nd billy jo gt marrid da otha dai so u phail~

god ikr nd lyke dat guitarist or wateva iz lyke a gazillion yeerz old wtf lol he needz to leeve bc i luv billy jo mor den all of u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol i have no clu who da fux dey r but all of dem r uglee specialy da gui wiff da green eyez lolz~

GREEN DAY SUCKS WTF JENNIFER ;D

thanks
Green Day does indeed rock much socks. XD
i love them :]

you're very welcome :]]

thanks.
okay on with the lesson::
to [i]italicise[/i] -- [i][/i]
to [b]bold[/b] -- [b][/b]
to underline -- [u][/u]
to strikethrough -- [s][/s]
there're codes for color and size too::
color -- [color=???][/color]
^^in place of the '???' put the name of the color, or if you want to get fancy use a hexadecimal code number
size -- [size=???][/size]
^^in place of the '???' put a number. 100 is regular size on here. any number under 100 makes the text smaller and any number over 100 makes it larger.
if you still don't quite get it, go here:: http://www.mibba.com/forums/bbcode/
i hope that helps

awwwww, thanks! :D I only have MSN, sorry :/

STUPID OLD PEOPLE!!! looong bottony thingie.... WTF IS THAT lmao

.....ok thats weird. lmao. god i am sooo excited for next summerrrrr cuz i get to be a stalker/popsicle salesgirl

XD

OH MY GOD...i'm your friend....it's like we're tied together for LIFE...im hyper lmao