Okay, I decided to delete the story for a while. I'm re-writing it. Similar plot, better writing, different title. I don't know when I'll have the re-written chapters up.
But in the meantime I am also writing a different story. Check it out (:
Oh ok. I thought you canceled it. lol
Oh, I know how it feels. By the way, my comp is f-ed up and I think everything got deleted. So..until the fix it...I can't do anything. Grr.
I'm bored. And you? How are you?
Not entirely. I mean, if he doesn't give up, then, he might be able to pull it off.
Haha, I read. Thanks.
Both, actually. Sometimes, you get a little bit of both and just go to bed. I mean, at least it happens to me all of the time.
Yea.
I miss Dark Secrets. What ever happened to them?
His parents win? Are they on a bet or something? Lol Oh, that too.
Wow. That’s really good of him. You know, standing up for him self and trying to prove everybody else wrong. I wish I could be like that. Hope he succeeds.
Awww, that’s nice. I’m jealous now. Lol
Oh, hahahaha.
Yay! I love reading. I haven’t had time to finish, though. Imagine…it took me like a month to reply this. XD I used to reply comments every day. What’s wrong with me? lol
They say practise makes perfect...don't know on the perfect thing, but I practise and I'm getting better.
It's not really that hard to describe, you've just got to picture it in your mind and write it down(easier said than done, though). It helps if you're a good observer too.
Well, then it's cool, I guess if Quizilla allows that.
I prefer a story with good description on the characters instead of pictures, though. But hey, that's just my opinion...
haha yeah. it seems really interesting so far, so ill see if i can give a bit more advice once your next chapter comes.
i mean, im no expert at writing, i just like to give ideas.