haha yeaaa..i like the story though. i mean, if i were you, i'd probably stretch the chapters out a little longer. add more detail and work up to the big events, instead of just writing it. sorry, i dont know how to put it in a nicer way. i just thought i'd mention it since most people like constructive critisism.
i cant type or spell today :/ im tired. lol but hey, you should read my story, too!
ahhh i love it. im actualy playing it now x)
i cant wait for sims 3 either. haha.
that sounds so cool
i'm already like on the edge of my seat
but youre making me even more excited
i mean im not an editor
but the whole atmosphere of it all XD
Yeah it's working perfectly thanks [=
I'm so excited about joining journalism!
My first article is on our new Superintendent.
Not very exciting, but it's something!
Really? What section did you edit?
i hate when people do that! every single time I'm about to go on my computer and listen to some music, the headphones are gone! I need to buy some new ones. -_-"
on a much lighter note have you seen the new Chips Ahoy commercial? (i know, it's random ^^)
Hehe, then that makes the two of us.
Stuck? How come?
=P I know. I will read it RIGHT now. =D
Aw, don’t say that! I will be the judge of that and I will comment on it. ^^
xx
Well,
I hate that i can't move the camera angle as i want it to.
I have bad quality.
I can't move that like green thingy that is atop of there head!
I can't download objects!
=/
My list can go on forever!
xD
i cant type or spell today :/ im tired. lol but hey, you should read my story, too!
ahhh i love it. im actualy playing it now x)
i cant wait for sims 3 either. haha.