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  • Soul To Squeeze;

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    Aw! Thanks again. Haha, it feels funny when people tell me that they love the story so much.

    And hahahahaha at Shrek comparision, though it is a good one. I think every human is sort of like an onion, if we are to use Shrek's perspective. We all have our layers and ideas, opinions and secrets; you know? I think that's what makes human relations and social things interesting - people are complex, no matter how you look at it.
    And just to say it here - Donkey is the coolest doneky ever!

    Yup, he is paranoid, but he has every right to be and it is actually bothering him a lot. I don't think Nick realizes the extent of 'mean' he goes to, he is simply trying to understand everything that's been going on. He is confused, I would say... and yet, he is determined in a way.

    And yes, Riley doesn't see herself very clearly. To me she seems like an intriguing person whereas she sees herself as a strange one. I think that, often, the people that stand out are the ones other people want to know more about. Lol. I am the stand-outer, you could say, though i doubt people care what I do when I stand out. :P

    I guess they think I am strange because I don't have much friends - one legit friend that is there for me. x) [but that's more than enough; better than having fakers around me]

    Cutesy parts are on and of course Nick and Riley will end up together... eventually. In the sequel, finally. Hahahahah. [dammit, insider info again]
    April 17th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • eternally.forever;;

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    Hey:)

    No worries I don't go on here as much as I used to. Life at home is ehh, I've had so much drama with Nicholas, my parents, friends, and just life itself. How are things for you darling?

    How's Cambridge?
    April 14th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • Soul To Squeeze;

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    First of all - thank you SO MUCH for that amazing comment! I appreciate every comment I get, but yours was truly amazing and it made me smile. Seriously, thank you for taking time to read and for liking this and I don't even mind stalking the story [I do that with some stories, as well; it's totally normal. And it did happen to me a few times that I didn't get an email about an update.]

    Anyway, yeah.
    I love describing Nick from Riley's point of view and I really think that it is the clearest way to see him because even though she thinks she is socially awkward and not-skilled, she notices people. You know? She really sees others and I think that the only problem is that she doesn't really understand that she can see people. Haha.
    Nick's layers. I think his layers creat layers for the story. He is an interesting character to write and I love just writing his actions.

    And Riley sees people, but there are a few things that happened behind the scenes... and not even readers know that; so you get some exclusive because I loved the comment. Anyway, something happened that makes Nick feel really guilty [when it isn't as serious as he makes it out to be in his head] and Cash knows, and he actually cares about Riley even though he isn't out-spoken as much. His character is there as a bystander that throws in comments. Well, you'll see the rest... point is Cash does not approve of what happened.

    Peter is not really a bad guy; he is simply in the way and he is persistent. I mean, he wouldn't have done anything bad to Riley, but on the other hand no one really likes him much because Peter is stubborn and he likes Riley; he is kind of annoying, though.

    And I actually got side tracked before writing those last cutesy moments and when I got back I was lost... seriously, I had this idea of what I would write and then it just faded away. Luckily I brought the cuteness back.

    I just love giving y'all Nickley cuteness [Nick + Riley = Nickley]

    - Maya, : )
    April 13th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • eternally.forever;;

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    Krystiana!

    My dear best friend, I am so sorry for the late reply and for being MIA. Life is just so ehh for me and Mibba was really the last thing on my mind.

    I missed you so much!

    What's up?
    April 6th, 2011 at 08:03pm
  • DreamingAlive

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    yo ninja there is really good writer on here that you should check out her 2 stories I read are awesome and I decided to just comment you because you are sleeping right now. I dont want to forget so I commented instead. her stories I read are calle speechless which has sequel and its a nick jonas fanfic. The other one that has less chapters is a logan lerman and alex pettyfer one. Oh and I know I made mistakes but I am lazy and tired to fix them. love ya sista =] also you need to update soon.
    April 4th, 2011 at 02:11pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Pssssshhhhh! That only makes me want you to update faster.
    cc:
    <3
    March 26th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • finding.karlei

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    I know what you mean when I get a comment I'm like "YESSS" and I start smiling at my computer like an idiot, it's one of the great perks of mibba [=
    you're very welcome! I love your writing.

    I would foshooo be into a sequel, I don't want them to end :[ They're so cute. I love them. I may be biased, but I don't think it'd be dragging it out at alllll, I think a sequel would just add to the awesomness <3
    March 25th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Lol well, I love my profile. Thanks for the love.
    And I'm SOOOOOOOO excited for 'Terrified'. Maybe a little bit too excited. Lol!
    But I loved the prequel, I just needed a little re cap cuz it's been a while since I've read your story. cc:
    But I love your writing and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
    <3
    March 25th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • CkynzieTheHero

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    I LUVZ YOU KREEPY!!!!!!!!!! I RLY DOEZ!!!!!!! XD
    March 11th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    Haha u are more than welcome I cant wait for the ext chapter, now I'm all excited lol: )
    February 8th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • Last Fantasy

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    I'm glad your like it.
    There layout info:
    Here is the banner: http://i54.tinypic.com/vxj9g2.jpg
    Here is the background: http://i52.tinypic.com/244oeqg.jpg
    And the color background: 1e1d1b
    Just make sure that the background is repeated horizontally.
    February 1st, 2011 at 02:57am
  • Last Fantasy

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    Hello.. Again :)
    Guess what.. I already have your banner done its more like a story layout. And before I completely finish with it, i wanted your opinion of it.
    Here is a screen cap of what it will look like: http://oi56.tinypic.com/2m3il2f.jpg
    If you want any changes made please tell me so. :)
    January 31st, 2011 at 08:45am
  • DreamingAlive

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    Hey sister I have not been on here forever. hahaha. I think that you need to hurry up and finish pm and get into fiy. Its really good and you need to update before you lose your readers. Also you should update the new one when you finish pm. love ya and talk to ya later.


    Lola
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:22am
  • Last Fantasy

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    Hello.
    I will love to make you a new banner for your story: Perfect Mistakes. I can't really edit the last one because I know longer have it. I will probably have it finished by Friday or so, if It's alright with you.
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:12am
  • eternally.forever;;

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    Hey!:)
    January 27th, 2011 at 04:17pm
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    I'm sorry that I deleted it! You took forever, and it was just getting in the way of everything else, sorrrry!
    But you can rad it anytime, ya spazzz.
    December 31st, 2010 at 11:18am
  • eternally.forever;;

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    Merry Christmas!!<3
    December 25th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • eternally.forever;;

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    http://stories.mibba.com/read/342470/Changes-You-Inspired/
    December 10th, 2010 at 01:53am
  • cookiepirate09

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    Here ya go, brat. ;)

    http://stories.mibba.com/read/342156/Making-Magic/1/
    December 8th, 2010 at 02:25pm
  • Kids With Guns;

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    Actually it's the other way around haha. I like a lot of the people but I like being alone most of the time, that's weird.

    well its the 9/12 rule. 9 missed days and you start failing. 12 and you fail. It's a private school thing I guess.

    Well that's not bad, where's Cambridge?
    December 4th, 2010 at 04:14am