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Just dropping by to let you know that Andrenaline Rush has been updated in caase you haven't checked yet.

Haha, no worries, I wasn't going to turn everything around and be that mean of a person. I made a promise that this story's ending would be much happier than the prequel's, after all... and that kind of sounds like not much of a promise, but I mean significantly. That doesn't mean everyone ends up together and happy (or, even alive), but that does mean that at least Ava and Zacky will be in a better place at the story's end. Not necessarily together, but still. ...And re-reading that is making it sound as if they both died and went to heaven or something. Sorry for that; it should've been less... terrible-sounding.

Matt's reaction was definitely hilarious; I completely agree! I know you were thinking about it all being in Zacky's head, so I hope you can rest easier now that Matt's confirmed her presence. Actually, that chapter was still in Zack's point of view, so I suppose that could still have been a huge hallucination... but chapter eight was in Ava's! I can't make a chapter in the point of view of a character who doesn't really exist, now can I? BOOM. <--- I'm hyper, sorry. Glad to hear you had faith I wouldn't be that terrible, though!

It most definitely is a whole new beginning; you're completely right! The coming chapters should definitely highlight some of the 'fun' as Zacky gets to re-teach Ava some things, but no comment as to what that even means. She's definitely going to learn from him, and there will be plenty of bonding time to look forward to. And you're obviously completely correct about Drake as well; he's most definitely still out for Zacky, in the very least. He'll be making a few appearances, don't you worry. Or do worry, actually; that might be better.

And I'm glad to hear you didn't despise the last chapter. xD Thanks for being so awesome and understanding!

Yeah, the friend I was planning on living with for the semester just suddenly up and told me she wasn't able to let me move in after all, and gave me literally no heads up. So... I was living out of a hotel for a bit trying to find a place to live that was a good fit for me and my dog. Not fun. But not desperate, either, because hotel living (while expensive as hell!) definitely has some perks. And I found a place and everything, and I really like my roommates, so everything's grand now.

Thank you so very much for being sweet and commenting on the last two chapters! You know by now that it means the world to me, so, seriously; THANK YOU! (:

Hiiiii thank you for your comment on Anywhere but Here!

I should have it updated by Monday.

Thank you for the wonderful comments you left on Slip! I very much appreciate all of them! It means the world that you took the time to tell me what you were thinking! (:

I'm glad you're enjoying Zacky and Ava's interactions together, and how they're actually talking (and not arguing for once, amiright?). To be fair, Zack didn't really try hard to win the bed argument. xD

And I know why you're cautious, and you've got good reason to be. You have no idea how tempting it is to make this all some big kind of mental breakdown of Zacky's, where it's all just a figment of his imagination. I've been wanting to make it that way for so long, because it really does seem too good to be true, doesn't it? There definitely is a twist, but no comment on whether or not this is it. The next chapter -- which I'm about to be posting any minute now -- should help answer your concerns, and if not, I'll be glad to give you a straight answer after that as to whether or not it's all in Zee's head.

You've got no reason to apologize to me! You're not obligated to comment! I totally understand life getting in the way (especially lack of privacy -- that must suck! and I also have no idea how you plug your laptop into the tv to make it work, but I'm just going to nod and pretend I understand the difficulties undoubtedly involved.). I took forever to update, anyways, so, seriously: no worries.

Her innocence is definitely amusing, though I have to admit it gets on my nerves a bit, only because I actually like(d?) Old Ava, so I'm biased. It definitely has the potential to be a fresh start, and if (and that's a big if) she gets her memory back, then it'll be an even bigger if over whether she forgives him or not.

Glad you got to say that, then. xD

Thanks again for commenting, love! (:

Haha, thank you so much for the comments you left on Slip! Your kind words and your enthusiasm really are motivating! (So motivating that I'm about to post another chapter for you!)

No comment on how Zack will respond when he gets to see the journal (if?), but she definitely was prepared for anything, and I think you're definitely right about her not wanting things to be the way they are. Hopefully that'll change in the coming chapters, yeah?

Will I continue writing other stories after this one? Oh, for sure! I've already got so many other ideas in my mind, but I'm trying to stay focused on one thing at a time right now, so I don't get distracted and leave a story unfinished. xD But I'll definitely keep everyone updated if I start another story anytime soon! (:

Thank you very much for your comment on Adrenaline.

Hey love! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on the final chapter of What We Left Unsaid! I very much appreciate it, and am very flattered by all of your kind words!

I know the ending was terribly depressing and not at all what anyone was hoping for, but I promise that it had to be that way, otherwise I wouldn't have ended it like that. The sequel isn't listed as a Tragedy, though, so you can take some comfort in that!

(Speaking of which, hopefully I'll be starting to regularly update the sequel sometime soon in the next few weeks!)

Oh, I'm such an awful person for not responding to you much, much sooner! I had a crazy hectic month, and I promise, if I had had any spare time, getting back to you would have been a priority! Any chance you'll forgive me? I can hold chapters hostage until you do, remember. (;

But really, thank you so much for you kind comment; it really made my day when I read it. And of course I called you lovely! Saying anything else would've been a lie. Pshhaw.

I know there was a lot of talking in the last few chapters, but I'm glad you were able to see that it was necessary, and even to appreciate that I didn't try and rush past the talking into more action-y stuff. Seriously, I worry about my balance of necessary down time and exciting action, and I'm glad that you think what I've been doing has been working well for the story. (:

Haha, and I'm glad to know you're wrapped around my finger with this story. xD I really never anticipated that this story would have any small percentage of the support and following that it has gained; I'm literally awed every day when I think about it. And, honestly, that's something that really pushes me to keep writing each chapter and keep updating. I started this story primarily for myself, and I still stand by that now, so I would still be writing this even if I wasn't updating, but I sure as hell would be dragging my feet and writing so much slower. So, really, you've all got me wrapped around your fingers as well. c;

Thank you again for the comment, and, again, I'm sorry for being so slow. The next update really won't take long; it's nearly done now already.

Oh, sweetie, it means so much to me to hear how much you enjoyed the chapter; seriously, thank you so very much for the very, very kind comment(s!) on the latest chapter of What We Left Unsaid! <3

I totally understand where you're coming from and even though I think the jury is still out on whether it makes me a terrible person to admit this, I was totally cheering Zacky on as well! You're right, of course; getting strangled is no where near comparable to what Zacky had to endure in the past, and Ava definitely had some things coming her way after all that has happened recently. (Or, not-so-recently, as it is.)

She definitely did give up her status and whatnot by making the decisions she's made, and whether she can still be considered a pureblood or not (since even the guys can't seem to agree on that), she definitely needs to adjust to the changes. Of course, her pride is a huge factor in who she is, so I'm not sure it's ever going to be possible for her to get down off that damned high horse or not. We'll have to see, I suppose.

I'm glad to hear you were satisfied with the chapter! That really means a lot. And, I won't keep you waiting long for the next one; I guarantee it! (Although, I do not guarantee nearly as much satisfaction xD).

I love hearing predictions! :D Obviously I'm not going to confirm or deny your suspicions, but I still like hearing them. xD As it is, I think that prediction is certainly at least plausible. Although, of course, that brings to question how she could have quoted the note to him, or handed off the note to her brothers in the first place, if she really did care about him. And your question makes sense as well... though, no one ever said her brothers and their friends had their backs turned completely to her. (;

I will update very very very very soon, just for you! :3

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Thanks so much for the comment on Ashes On the Ground! If you have any questions or concerns about the story, feel free to message me :)

Haha, why am I not surprised you were rolling your eyes throughout all of the last update? And fair point; the amount of drama and frustration that she's added to the whole pack by being there certainly doesn't seem like she's bringing anything to the table, so to speak. Maybe she's not fit to be a part of their pack.

Always! (; You know I can't ever make something even remotely simple. xD

Thank you, though, for being so understanding about my slow updates, for commenting again, and for all of your kind words. It really does mean a lot! And I'm updating in just a few moments for you again. (:

Hey, girlie! I'm glad you aren't judging me for totally updating the last chapter while I was drunk! Apparently alcohol was the only thing that was going to get me to commit to actually posting the chapter. It was such a hard decision to make!

And apparently a very good one; I'm so glad that you really enjoyed it and thought that it was a good chapter! I know it was obviously not what anyone was expecting and certainly not what anyone was hoping for, but I'm glad you could appreciate it anyways!

It's funny how at first it seemed like Zacky was handling everything terribly, but now it's pretty clear he's actually doing an amazing job. I certainly could never have kept that kind of a secret for that long... and I sure as hell couldn't have even tolerated the slightest little smirk from her after the fact.

And I know, it's definitely not fair that he had to go through that! I feel so terrible for him, and I honestly had the basics of this chapter outlined months ago, and I still have never gotten over how bad I feel for making him go through this. He's definitely a really strong guy! And an amazing friend!

I know, I know, everyone wants to know about the fifty million, and I promise there is actually a whole story behind it and it will definitely be eventually revealed -- it's not going to be some big 'oh, it never mattered' kind of thing, I promise! But... the whole story isn't going to be revealed for at least a little while. I'm sorry! I will highlight this line from Zacky, though: "All we do know is that Drake showed up a few days later, she’s got fifty million dollars of his in her bank account, and she’s currently in a position to render me essentially immobile by just forgetting to make the damned tea on time." That definitely seems to insinuate that he see's a very definite connection between those three details, and they don't necessarily think she stole it.

I know you must be dying with anticipation, and I am so so sorry for keeping you waiting so long! I am just about to post the next update, though, and I swear the next one after that won't take nearly as long as this one did! I really really appreciate you taking the time to comment though, girl! Your comment really meant the world to me and it was honestly one of the ones that really inspired me the most to get this next chapter posted even though I wasn't a hundred percent sure of it! Love you!

Hey, love! I'm sorry that I didn't get back to you until now -- I saw your comments on Chapter Twenty-nine, and I really really appreciated them, but I just honestly didn't have the time to sit down and type out a response! (Or the internet connection, but that's a whole different story.)

Anyways, to answer your question in a super-late way: yes, Zacky and Ava have slept together (of course, non-sexually-speaking) multiple times. I guess Chapter Thirty already kind of cleared that up for you, but I still wanted to answer your question! And this might make me a terrible person, but I'm totally thrilled to hear you thought the beginning of Twenty-nine was Zacky and Ava; I kind of had an evil moment and wanted to see if I could trick anyone into thinking that for just a small moment. xD

And thank you, of course, for your comment on the latest chapter!

Don't give up too soon; the story is far from over. (;
Of course, it does look a bit bleak right now, and I make absolutely no promises that the ending of this story will be butterflies and daisies, but you never know!

I'm glad I could get you to squeal like a little girl! I hoped this chapter would be that exciting for all of you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. (:

No promises on whether what Ava is hiding is 'bad bad', but I do promise it will all be revealed in the distant future! And no comment on what Zacky's feeling or not feeling. That's for him to tell, and he should clear some of that up in the not-too-distant future. (;

It's definitely a surprise that he didn't run off and screw anyone, especially given the fact that he did manage to get her permission. One would think he would've rushed to do that before she changed her mind! But, it is a rather busy and stressful time for the pack at the moment, and no one's supposed to be out alone... and I can't imagine the Berrys would have been okay with a chick coming back with Zacky and them, you know? Or he could have other reasons, i'unno. (;

And, yeah, you're totally right. Ava was kind of overboard with the cursing in this chapter, I know. x.x' She's like that when she's exhausted and irritated, for whatever reason. She's usually at least a little bit more tactful. xD

And I'm glad you think it's sweet of her to have given in! I know a lot of people were just irritated with how much hell she raised about the whole thing that they didn't even care about the end result.

So, as always, thank you ever so much for the very kind comment, and I will do my best to get the next chapter up as soon as I can! (:

I think you're probably right; Brian's pushing Ava doesn't really help the situation much at all. He's right to be worried she wouldn't ever get to the point where she decides she's ready to open up, but pushing still isn't helpful. Especially with everything that's going on, as you pointed out. Glad to hear you enjoyed their little game of "let's pretend to be Drake!" (:

And I mean... they have a past together, obviously, because they have the same group of friends. I know that's not what you mean, but I'm just saying. You remember correctly -- Brian's said they've always been "like cats and dogs", so it's safe to assume they've had their little hatred thing going on for years before he was 21 and she was 18. I think what everyone else is all worked up over is why Zacky said those things all those years ago, and why Ava felt the need to quote them when he had her pressed up against a wall and was attempting to seduce her. I think a good number of readers drew lines from that and inferred that Zacky did something to fuck with Ava's mind or self-confidence or whatever a bit related to that.

But just to be clear: those two never slept together in the past. That would have made them mates. I won't agree or disagree with any of the other theories floating around about what happened between them, but I will explain that it wasn't that.

Anyways, thank you again for leaving an awesome comment -- as always! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what's going on in your head -- especially if you have such long shifts you're already dealing with!

Hey there, girl! Just dropping by to thank you ever so much for the kind comment you left on the latest chapter! I really appreciate it!

But I do think there was one thing I apparently was not at all obvious about even though I thought I was being obvious. Whoops! You might want to take a look a little closer to what exactly she says about what she's 'thinking'. Because Zacky didn't interrupt her or curse at her or attack her at all after hearing those words. And he didn't randomly decide to switch the conversation to the past. And she emphasized every word, including one line where she said "sorry to burst your bubble, Princess, but...". Who calls who 'Princess' in this story?

Maybe that shines a little light onto why she didn't want to sleep with him? If not, I can clarify further, because it was something that was supposed to be revealed, and apparently I just suck at revealing things. xD

And I know you and pretty much everyone else want all of those things to happen! I know! And I'm sorry it's taking so long for this story to get to any of those points, where in most other stories the two would be happily ever after by now or something. I'm sorry! Butttt maybe at least one of those hopes of yours will end up coming true soon. (;

I'm glad you enjoyed the update -- especially the ending -- and OH MY GOD THANK YOU for noticing how playful her actions were! I don't know if anyone else picked up on that, but I'm glad that at least you did! Yeah, her bouncing around (or "dancing", I think Brian called it) was definitely meant to be playful, especially with the fact that she wasn't really growling at him in any real, fierce way. Not that Zacky even necessarily noticed that, but whatever.

And I'll tell you the same thing I told Ailurophile; I make no promises that the next scene picks up exactly where this scene ended, so no guarantee that you'll get to see what happens between Zacky and Ava then. But I do promise that the next chapter most definitely will center around the two of them. (:

Oh, the Brian-Zacky moment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know it was stressing pretty much everyone out to have those two at each other's throats all the time... myself included! It just seemed wrong to have them mad at each other any longer.

And yeah, they definitely were in need of a more relaxed chapter, what with all of the drama going on. I'm glad you didn't find it out of place!

ANYWAYS, thank you so very much for being awesome as usual and commenting again on the latest chapter! I promise I will update soon!

Thank you for being so understanding, love! And thank you, as always, for the kind comment on the latest chapter! (:

You're definitely right, things are getting pretty complicated. I wish I could say that would be going away sometime soon, but, yeah... that'd be a lie. xD