Haha, me too. I'd wanted to do a story like that but I think Summer Storms had been blocking me. Once I got it out of my mind for a little while it all kind of trickled into place.. haha.
Good. Because I was starting to hesitate that that analogy was a little disturbing!
No lie, I normally am not known for extremely long comments, but your writing deserves to be commented on like that!
It does seem more logical, for Eli to be an outsider. Even though - by the way you describe him - he's extremely sexy. But still, understandable. A twist that I think I'll enjoy...
neutiquam erro - "i am not lost at all". Eh, if you'd like to seen the meaning behind it you could go on my formspring and someone (i think Rina) asked about it and i explained it more in depth.. lol.
YAY! I loath writer's block. It's like mental constipation but without a cure! (sorry if that was a little gross :/ ) haha. But really, writer's block is horrible! Even though, Iron Age: Rephaim came along during a huge writer's block for Summer Storms. So not a terribly bad I guess.
I will happily be your first subscriber! I just love those quirky stories. Plus, you have a way with writing...
I'm so happy you like it! I'm planning on doing a massive edit for grammar etc on it this week, so hopefully I'll have things fixed up. I've done like... oh gosh, 9 pages of research for that story. I love it. I just genuinely enjoy writing it. And the blue-eyed guy thing is a favorite scene of mine..
Oh now I could definitely read something like THAT - something with an interesting plot twist, such as the gay concept. Brilliant. lol. Are you planning on posting it?
Agreeeed 100 times over! I mean, i appreciate all comments but it's a little drag when you spend hours slaving over a chapter and someone reads it and all they can come up with is a few words. Butttt oh well haha.
:D thank you! I really do love that you commented (really, commented, not just 'i like it'). I'm so happy you like it. I'm definitely doing my own editing on this story so there are bound to be mistakes--damn my dyslexia and horrible grammar. XD
haha yes, I love a good prankster! ..don't you just hate those stories where the girls is [i]obsessed[/i] with their best friend?..maybe it's just me. :/ haa, anyway..
I finish my Spanish h.w. today and I'm going to tackle Masked and try and give you a really good review! ..I'm excited to see the plot twist :D
*claps excitedly* oh goodie! for a moment there I was freaking out in case Eli was not still his sexy self! Ha.
I feel the same way. I've been writing this other story I have posted on here about demons and stuff (not real serious, more of just some fun writing) and I just now realized that my main character isn't even my favorite :/ which is odd, because normally that's how I am..
Definitely gotta say, Eli is my favorite in Masked!
I promise you.. Summer Storms does have depth to it, once you start reading into it haha. I realized my first couple chapters seem really boring, now that I look back on it XD But i'm uber excited because someone is editing it for me!
..it changed :( I hope it's still about sexy-ghost-like-vampire-pervert-who-bangs-up-best-friends-and-hits-on-kevin... lol. I'm sure I'll still like it though. And likewise, drop of comment, I know you've now got me interested in reading it for sure! (screw Spanish homework...ha. I wish)
Haha I just realized that right now! ..I will definitely have to re-read the new stuff! That will be my goal for this weekend.. among loads of homework :P
Thanks! I did ask to have Avenging Fridays of Malebolge taken off though, but Summer Storms got nominated so it's up there. I seriously love that site, you guys (as you know) r o c k (:
Yeah, it feels like ages. I'm on a public computer at the moment since my laptop has pretty much decided to commit seppuku. TAFE (equivalent of community college) has started, so I'm redoing my final year, working hard and, as a result, haven't got a lot of time. :(
How're things with you? Still gonna be my foreign doctor friend?
Ohh hah the story isn't up yet! It's just the layout. I'm trying to get people excited for it...I am a shameless promoter, I realize that. Either way, you'll definitely be able to see when it's been posted. It's about halfway finished at the moment, however...hopefully it'll be done by the end of the weekend!
That's a common theme of my stories: forgotten words, careless mispellings and grammatical errors. It's because I write on WordPad so I don't have to deal with Microsoft Word (margins and paragraph spacing and the red and green squiggles annoy me). It doesn't show me when a sentence is off or a word is spelled wrong and I'm much too lazy to go back and fix it.
I wish there were more novel like stories online but if you're looking for some good stuff to read, I'd definitely recommend: break.my.bones, Avata and pieces; (they're all my friends if you're looking for their pages). Best stories online, in my opinion.
Haha, me too. I'd wanted to do a story like that but I think Summer Storms had been blocking me. Once I got it out of my mind for a little while it all kind of trickled into place.. haha.
Good. Because I was starting to hesitate that that analogy was a little disturbing!