oh. sorry. i was sleepy when i made this poem. :)
August 4th, 2007 at 04:22pm
the poem overall was amazing! what you're trying to say...
but ya need to put tenses in the right places... certain words should be in past tense if you get what i mean...
but anywho... the overall poem was beautifully written!
i LOVE it!!!
^ ^
