Finally Gave Up - Comments

..that was amazing.
My eyes swellled with tears=(
Michelle, you know I'm here for you and you can talk too me.
I know how you feel, even though you might think you can't turn too anyone..
I know I don't know you very well, and Eileen is your best friend..
but if you need soemthing, or you wanna talk, you can always turn
too me.
I'm here for you<33

I agree with Veritas and Kurtni.
Your poems are really amazing. =]

[i]My stomach drops to the floor
My hands tremble, my head begins to hurt
And my chest tightens with every breath I take[/i]

That was a very good description of the physical pains you feel when dealing with rejection, depression, and feeling unwanted and abandonded. I liked how the different ideas are sort of piled onto each other, because thats alot like how you feel. Great Poem.

Thanks :)

It's sad, but true and beautifully written.
Well done! <3