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  • Sweetest.Poison

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    that was really good.
    if its just a word to replace [blank] try say,
    it read it threw with the word say and it sounded decent, cause then it makes it appear that the persons talking to someone.
    August 20th, 2007 at 03:07pm
  • ending.endearment.

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    [quote="tone_deaf"]That was actually really good. You really don't need help. Clap[/quote]

    totally agreed ^ ^
    i loved this poem!!!!!!!!!
    August 20th, 2007 at 02:47pm
  • tone_deaf

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    That was actually really good. You really don't need help. Clap
    August 20th, 2007 at 01:09pm
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