Escaping the Influence - Comments

  • Dork. Loves. You.

    Dork. Loves. You. (100)

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    I don't know why, but I kept laughing near the end! >.<
    This is really good!
    November 8th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • Dewey Desca

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    thats good keep on writing never stop no matter what
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:22am
  • spliff

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    It's really deep and personal. So much emotion.
    Your a wonderful writer dear.
    August 21st, 2009 at 07:23am
  • IronMaidenBby

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    I like this, it's very personal and harsh and honest. Is this based upon the girl that you loved but she broke your heart that you mentioned on your profile? I would imagine so. ;)
    August 21st, 2009 at 02:22am
  • justamanda

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    This is great.
    Pure emotion and anger.
    Keep on writing and loving.
    August 20th, 2009 at 09:40pm
  • RENPekama

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    Nice writing though.
    July 22nd, 2009 at 03:07pm
  • RENPekama

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    It never goes away ...
    July 22nd, 2009 at 03:07pm
  • GalaxyAblaze

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    deep. how'd u write this? its good stuff!

    please read my newest poem
    July 22nd, 2009 at 11:13am