Such a Pretty Act - Comments

I love the lyrical flow to this poem. It has no set rhythm, yet is easy to follow by the punctuation and phrasing. The only thing that didn't feel as serene is the shift from the second to last sentence to the final one. For some reason, the contrast between the lengthier sentence above the last makes the ending feel really short and unexpected.

Beautiful work! You've got a style that sets you apart from the many poems I see today.

I found it very beautiful, well written.

I like this one as well I kind of feel like this is about people being fake and how everyone can change the role they play at the drop of a dime..

Maybe its just me but I just find this to be a very lovly poem in a strange and ood way

im so sad
i dont know what this poem means
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Beautimusss lol. I love it.

this is awesome!! =D very good poem =]

wow jessi. thats amaxing and true.