I felt your pain. - Comments

Reminds me of my first crush. I could never bring myself to talking to him but I was always stalking him and I certainly cared if something bad happened to him.

I love the ending. ''I did feel your pain, I did care'' but it makes you think of emotional pain rather than just the physical one. Maybe it's your pain, not just his, the pain to see that he's hurt and maybe you could help him, but you can't do anything about it because you are afraid to tell him how you feel.

Beautifully written.

thats horrible. but amazingly written.

omg.. thats so sad yet amazing... you're really an awesome poet spammy,
I love your work (8

Such a sad poem. =[ It was a good one though.

I will agree and say that the eyes thing is a bit repetitive, but well done altogether. =D

that was really good, sad, but really good :D

This is amazing! You're a really good writer.

wow that was really good.... sad...... but good!

[b]Awww, that was so sad.

But um yet again another fantastic poem :]
Ily Spammy.[/b]

The rhyming is good and the concept and story is sad. But I just have one crit...that you speak too often about his eyes. It's quite cleche and repetitive, it sounds almost like there is nothing else to this boy. Which I know can't be true if you chose to write about him (real or made-up) So then to me, all I want to see is that you show me what makes you love him.

But well done, I really enjoyed it.

Oh Spammy... :hug:
I'm sorry. It must have been hard... But the poem's wonderful. I love the rhyme and rhythm in this - my poetry usually just goes all over the place.
Awesome work, you're a fantastic poet.