Though I agree with [b]Capt' Jack Harkass[/b] with everything she said, I will actually write my own review and put some effort into it.
Your descriptions were amazing , though somewhat a b it too extravagant for a poem.
[b]Like a dead bird from the sky, she drops to the floor.[/b]
Oh my god, how I loved that simile.
The concept was brilliant, at first I was decieved to think that the object in question was a wild animal or so while in fact he was a vampire.
Fantastic, really.[/i]
This is....wow.
Your descriptions are [i] phenomenal [/i], let me tell you that.
As I was reading it, I could really feel everything that was occurring. Extraordinary.
I wish I could write poetry as beauitful - I think [i] everybody [/i] does.
You've got a real gift.
Good job! -applauds-
that really was, so real, it was amazing, your choice of words,
and your description work, were both really good.
amazing job.
im off to read your other poems :D
btw, ive got another one up xD