Avoiding What I Refuse To Admit - Comments

  • lovepeace1992

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    You my dear write beautifully! I love you and don't forget you're not alone! EVER!
    You amaze me in the best way possible! Keep up the awesome writing! <3
    October 22nd, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • its an infestation

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    this is really really good!
    I think this is one of the only really good stories I have read that use so many rhyming words, you didn't base the whole story on whatever could fit in with the other words, this is truly amazing <3
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:37pm
  • mexi-murray

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    this poem is great!! it made perfect sense and i think everyone can connect to it one way or the other. i love this poem
    October 21st, 2009 at 08:52am