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I really enjoyed the middle/end of this..... the start was a little awkward, I think the rhyming put you off. It definitely made up for it in the middle, I was drawn in completely.
October 31st, 2009 at 12:24pm
its an infestation
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I think you focused a bit too much on rhyming?
But it was pretty good :)
October 31st, 2009 at 11:24am
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