To be very honest, i find it quite very interesting. it is your genre to write poems that don't rhyme, yet they give out the incredible feeling almost as same as the ones with rhyme in them, only better sometimes.
it has this certain flair of: heartbroken teen, am i right?
is this about: EAT? aww, i hope you're okay ate sofie. yeah, he has stupid grins. :D
overall, your poem is great. truly great. poems are all about expression of feelings, and you did that very well. :D
it has this certain flair of: heartbroken teen, am i right?
is this about: EAT? aww, i hope you're okay ate sofie. yeah, he has stupid grins. :D
overall, your poem is great. truly great. poems are all about expression of feelings, and you did that very well. :D