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  • The Samurai Girl

    The Samurai Girl (145)

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    Oooh, nice rhymes you got here!

    The poem's very personal and deep, and the end's surprising with the sudden confession of suicide. However, it's fine, because of the reason listed so emotionally throughout the lines.

    Great job! :)
    November 29th, 2009 at 02:15pm
  • midnight_glow

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    You've worded this poem very well. I like the way how it seems so personal and feels as if it's true ??

    Good work =]
    November 29th, 2009 at 12:09pm
  • Donnie Darko.

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    very well written
    November 29th, 2009 at 09:34am
  • Cruciatus

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    Love the poem.
    November 29th, 2009 at 09:12am
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