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  • hiyaitsjackie

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    that was soo good (: you are really amazing at writing. I felt like you really felt her pain and her ambitions for a better life. Good luck with everything (: let me know what other thing you want me to read. this was amazing
    March 3rd, 2010 at 04:48am
  • Ferb Fletcher

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    Damn. That was good. You could feel the determintation in the last couple of stanzas. Also, you could really see her being abused from your descriptions, that's talent right there. Really well written, the rhymes only add to the overall effect. Great work!
    December 9th, 2009 at 07:14am
  • she floats

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    HOLYSHIT.
    <3
    December 1st, 2009 at 03:14am
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