I'm In Denial. - Comments

i really like this poem i can relate to it, its well done - awesome job =]

this was awesoe. I love the rhyming scheme! I'm always one to stress about matching up the number of syllabes, but in the first paragraph, your syllables did not match up at all, but it WORKED! and it was great!!!!

I love the story you told. And i love the finality of the last paragraph. Especially when you restated the "waiting by the phone" line. It brought everything to a close really well. Great job!!!