Painters mistakes can't be erased, They are learned from - Comments

This was very well-written. I agree with it's_electric in the way that you could add a bit more punctuation, but it's still a very good poem. The flow was good, your usage of words was great. All in all, awesome job :)

Hmm, this is good. I like it a lot. A few things I want to point out:
- I like the little lines you have like, "Tell me if the lines are fading together or if they're standing out'' and such
-A bunch of people write about broken relationships, myself included, and I like how you made yours unique by putting it in the perspective of a painter
-Maybe you could add a few more commas or semi colens in different places just to help the poem flow better but other than that it flowed wonderfully.

Very good!