Hello Disaster, It's Me Again - Comments

This is really, really good! I like the rhythm a lot and how you worded it. Parts of it reminded me a lot of the song Sweating Bullets. This is very cool. :)

Jeebus. I loved this! :D
It was so...crawly. "Sometimes I talk to the wall just for fun."
Great poem. :3
I'd love to see more. :)

:D
Rhyme poems. Are my favorite.
And it actually made sense.
I love it. :]

Wow, you're really talented. :) You seriously need to write more poems. I would love to read them.