I like this a lot- you're a really talented poet... especially considering that you wrote this about six-and-a-half years ago.
You can really feel the Angel's emotions while reading it. The only thing that I didn't really like was something that confused me- once she found out she was the Angel of Tears, why were there were no more tears?
You can really feel the Angel's emotions while reading it. The only thing that I didn't really like was something that confused me- once she found out she was the Angel of Tears, why were there were no more tears?