This was beautiful. I'm not supprised since you've written it. You're very good. I wish more people thought like this.. and took your advice that is throughout this poem. it's quite beautiful.. wow. :D
January 6th, 2011 at 08:54pm
Awe, I thought that this was really really sweet. It had a good rhythm and line consistency. There were a couple minor spelling mistakes, but nothing major.
Good job :)
