Crawling Back Inside - Comments

Yeah, I kind of felt like I just kept saying the same thing over and over but I was upset so I just kept going on and on. LOl......It does end a little strange.

What are you saying? This is GOOD! Most people write better when they're depressed or angry ... At least that's what I think because I experience it too. =) Let me tell you about the ending though ... Cause it just suddenly ended without any warning so I thought changes will make the poem better. Just telling what I thought though. =)

kind of redundant in parts, but overall pretty good.
agreed, i write better stuff when im depressed, etc.....
kudos