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  • jewel5664

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    Thanks. =) Glad you liked it.
    And ok. I will keep that in mind!
    January 24th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • Oscar Wilde

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    I liked it. It was interesting. The only thing I would mention that you could work on is the structure of it. It might flow better if you alter the lengths of some lines using enjambment. Just a suggestion. :)
    January 23rd, 2010 at 05:56pm
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