Writing - Comments

Wow, Kayla. Just...wow.

You're such an amazing writer. I don't even know what else to say...just...

I loved it. :)

I love this poem, Kayla. I loved it from the moment you showed it to me.

But I think it would be better as prose.

You don't need to use such big words..or make your lines as long.
Poetry should be simple.


:shifty

i loved it!
*claps idiotically*

writing really does feel like that.
sometimes something will just hit you and it feels as though the world is brighter once you get it down on paper.
you wrote about writing.. and you made it perfect.
your words are always amazing.

This is beautiful, really honest
I wrote a similar one last night
Amazing, it's great

I love this! I only wish that the rhythm throughout was constant to make it more memorable~

write more!