January 2nd, 2008 at 12:39am
I love this poem, Kayla. I loved it from the moment you showed it to me.
But I think it would be better as prose.
You don't need to use such big words..or make your lines as long.
Poetry should be simple.
:shifty
You're such an amazing writer. I don't even know what else to say...just...
I loved it. :)