Stuck In Staccato - Comments

Words.
Such beautiful things they are.
And you have such an otherworldly affinity for them! The things you come up with, the concepts alone, are brilliant. But the way you map them out and weave them together to create beauty like this is simply breathtaking!
Beautiful.

It is so beautiful I loved it :)

I really like this poem, it's rhytm flows well, and I like how as the verses got shorter, it seemed to pick up pace. The wording is great (:

I don't believe I quite understand this, seeing as if Staccato is a word instead of a place; I am unaware of it's meaning.
But it's really good. Written well, great wording and meaningful. I can feel that you put a lot into it, and that's what matters.

Good job ^^