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  • Ferb Fletcher

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    Very beautiful and just like so many of your poems, it's very powerful as well. Great job!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 02:20am
  • Ave.Maria.

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    This is really good! You're an amazing writer, I especially like the first paragraph where you describe 'her' so well, as something that is just out of his reach. It has a good rhythm (:
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:25pm
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