Love it. It's really well written and has a very nice message.
February 6th, 2010 at 03:26am
Ok this is wonderful! One thing you should keep in mind when posting online is the format is different onscreen then on paper. You need to insert an extra space between the stanzas otherwise its hard to read onscreen.
I dont know why you said you can write though! This was really good!! Im so jealous of people who can actually rhyme in poetry and not only rhyme but do it well like you do.
It had a very nice flow and a very good message.
Good job!
