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  • Ivy-kun

    Ivy-kun (100)

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    i think i'm gonna cry...
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • TechnicolorSunshine

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    You have a brilliant way with words, the amount of emotion and detail and pain in this piece can only be created by a true poet. I especially like the second stanza and I like how you kept the topic throughout and kept the reader focused. This is powerful and heartaching and just your strength in itself enpowers this poem. im really sorry about your loss <3
    February 7th, 2010 at 06:29am