I'm Dead in Your Eyes - Comments

Really well written, great job and I wish you good luck with the contest.

Amazing, truly amazing. It's deep enough that I understand the general direction of the poetry, but vague enough that I can relate it to something I've been through or something I've read.

I like this a lot.
It's deep and it paints an image.

wow!...just wow
this was incredibly touching and sad
i loved it...i think this is probably one of my fav poems on mibba
i really did feel the pain of it all

very, very deep. and i had a picture in my mind throughout the whole poem. it was almost as if i was feeling the pain and loneliness.. this was great!