I'm Dead in Your Eyes - Comments

  • Ferb Fletcher

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    Really well written, great job and I wish you good luck with the contest.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 02:39am
  • rocknrolljunkie989

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    Amazing, truly amazing. It's deep enough that I understand the general direction of the poetry, but vague enough that I can relate it to something I've been through or something I've read.
    April 12th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • LostinTime

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    I like this a lot.
    It's deep and it paints an image.
    March 4th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • KiSs_Me_I'm_BrOkEn

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    wow!...just wow
    this was incredibly touching and sad
    i loved it...i think this is probably one of my fav poems on mibba
    i really did feel the pain of it all
    February 25th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • phantomatthewindow

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    very, very deep. and i had a picture in my mind throughout the whole poem. it was almost as if i was feeling the pain and loneliness.. this was great!
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:11am