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Dimethyltryptamine (100)

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This seriously brought tears to my eyes.
So beautiful and emotinal. I love the pattern and the way you've constructed it.
Simply amazing.

January 16th, 2011 at 06:16am

roxsoxx (100)

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"but then the mirror beckons, calls me to it's cold stare, and I see how ugly I am, and the cracks begin to spread again." >>>>> my favorite part. <3
*mini applaud* nice job on this. :)
I also like how it is written, like all over and the lines not one after the other. It contributes well to the poems tone. :)

February 22nd, 2010 at 08:05am

wolf-girl shadows (100)

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i know what you mean this is very good i have two up at the moment if you want to read them sometime.

February 21st, 2010 at 03:49am

Annika Lee 17 (100)

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This truly is amazing. It is very powerful.

February 14th, 2010 at 04:49pm

Cross.My.Heart... (100)

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I love this/it's amazing.
You have real talent. Keep the good work up!

February 13th, 2010 at 08:05pm