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  • eeeee

    eeeee (100)

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    Poems don't have to ryhme. They just have to make sense. This one was really good if you ask me. I like it becuase I know it came from your heart. It is an expresssion of what your feeling so you can make it anything you like. Flow or no flow it was good.

    *hug*

    RAWRmuffins
    xx
    January 19th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • mannaquin

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    the poem is very real and ppl can relate but it doesnt rhyme and it doesnt flow. i think there needs to be more like 4 lines that are shorter than 2 lines that are longer.its great dont get me wrong but it just doesnt flow. hope you understand email me or comment on my page if you want /need more help
    December 16th, 2007 at 09:41am
  • NAAA

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    It's just so accurate and so real.I love it so much:)
    November 15th, 2007 at 03:59am
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