September 5th, 2010 at 03:09pm
I Tried - Comments
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Holy crap! i love this!! i fucking loooooovvvve this! this takes talent to create something like this!!July 13th, 2010 at 08:04am
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I can relate [i] so [/i] much <3July 7th, 2010 at 09:00pm
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Wow this was really, really good. 0.0 Sad but good. :]May 22nd, 2010 at 06:33am
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this is so awesome. i love it.
really good job (:March 14th, 2010 at 10:33pm -
sweetie this is amazing. I completely empathize with the girl in the poem. I love it dear.March 14th, 2010 at 07:06pm
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Amazing. I love it twin. (ll) :DMarch 14th, 2010 at 08:41am
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veryy good. is it a song? i feel like it could be a really good song :]March 14th, 2010 at 08:13am
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this almost made me cry! i love how the story goes, how she died and how he really did love her too. its wonderful, i love the rhyme and yes i agree with the comment below! keep writing!March 14th, 2010 at 06:48am
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this is a lovely piece of writing <3 I totally know how the girl in the poem feels.
:) the rhyming is good too!
Ohh- but I have a itty suggestion if that's okay-
the usage of cussing in poem takes away from the beauty of the poem. there's so many other, more artistic words you can use <3March 14th, 2010 at 06:34am -
I loved it babe. (: Keep writing!March 14th, 2010 at 06:15am
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