Broken Girl - Comments

Lady Jessa (100)

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Is is........AMAZING!!!

July 25th, 2010 at 03:40am

FrozenFire (100)

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oh and i loved the first stanza, "the hands of fate her only chance" wow that is really good! bravo!

March 16th, 2010 at 09:28pm

FrozenFire (100)

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very very nice =) my favorite lines were "Replaced with black is white
All wrongs fade to right" i might use something similar to that sometime, thanks for some inspiration! great poem, i adore it

March 16th, 2010 at 09:27pm

DearAgony (100)

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I loved this poem!!!

March 16th, 2010 at 06:14pm

roxsoxx (100)

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the 2 last sentences of the 1st paragraph is my favorite.
I like this <3

March 16th, 2010 at 11:35am