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  • Sierra Kusterbeck

    Sierra Kusterbeck (100)

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    Like the previous commenters have said, your metaphors are fantastic, and each line is full of emotion.

    You did a really good job.
    April 19th, 2011 at 07:24am
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    Your metaphors are amazing. Each line is full of emotion. This really stood out.
    June 30th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • thatbekkahgirl

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    I love how you wrote this
    the metaphors were swell
    and the lines

    "Wish I could say I stand with the wind to my back
    But the sun is in my eyes"

    really got me
    March 18th, 2010 at 11:40pm
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