Likely Be - Comments

Like the previous commenters have said, your metaphors are fantastic, and each line is full of emotion.

You did a really good job.

Your metaphors are amazing. Each line is full of emotion. This really stood out.

I love how you wrote this
the metaphors were swell
and the lines

"Wish I could say I stand with the wind to my back
But the sun is in my eyes"

really got me