That was amazing. My favorite poem of yours so far ( not just cuz' I sort of helped, but not really at all ) but it's so cool! You explained it perfectly, and you developped and made it so much more soulful and beautiful :)
Gosh, just enter this in a contest somwhere I won't even try and critique it!
Gosh, just enter this in a contest somwhere I won't even try and critique it!
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for five stars.
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