No, thanks alot i prefer it when people tell me when I've made a mistake. Thanks alot for the comments too. Means alot to me.
April 10th, 2010 at 07:14pm
This is really meaningful, and usually people can't write rhyming poems swell, but you have managed to incorporate it very good into the poem. Just watch out for spelling mistakes ^^ Such as 'bieng' and 'empression'. It's being and impression.
Sorry for being picky, but it's like a little OCD I have.
